Audrey's Pick

Over the fence —
Strawberries — grow —
Over the fence —
I could climb — if I tried, I know —
Berries are nice!

But — if I stained my Apron —
God would certainly scold!
Oh, dear, — I guess if He were a Boy —
He'd — climb — if He could!


I love this one, which a friend who took this class last year actually showed me. The variation in meter between and within the stanzas, the speaker's identification with boyhood, the idea of God as a scold -- so much fun stuff going on. 

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